We're addicted to our computers. We're addicted to the Internet. We're addicted to every status update our friends make on Facebook. Some of us are addicted to Juicy Campus, others are addicted to the pictures of his ex-girlfriend with another guy. The computer and subsequently the Internet has devoured our lives. I have to agree with a lot of the things mentioned in this section on Computers, Drugs and Modern Student Culture. Most of what I could hear through the atrocious audio quality, I already knew. I'm a Computer Science major, I've studied the social influence of computers. It's something that many of us are aware of, the addictive nature of technology.
Unfortunately, it's that plus more that made this video undeniably boring to me. There wasn't clash, there wasn't conflict. I want to see some action! I want them to jump at each other's throats, not agree on every bloody point. If you're going to throw two professors at each other in a head to head video chat conference for a blog, you might as well make it two different people. Instead, they are so similar, the video might as well have been a single person giving a lecture. They had interesting points, there's no denying that. The presentation was just so disappointingly boring when it had so much potential. What a waste...
I spent most of my life isolated from other kids my age. The result was that I grew up with a very adult perspective on life, mostly my parents'. I also grew up in a third world country cut off from most modern technology. Combine the two and I'm an old fart in a young whipper snapper's body. When I come across other people 100 percent absorbed in technology, I wonder why? And it wasn't just the Internet. Professor Edmundson was wrong. I deal with people even now obsessed with the latest rumors on Gossip Girl, or who Sylar will kill next in Heroes. We are still attached to our televisions, just as much as to our computers.
His argument is true, however. People like constant entertainment. xkcd(http://xkcd.com/477/) said it best. His other argument was also true. People always want to be somewhere else. They don't want to be in their crappy homes living their crappy lives. They want to be in the show, they want to live the lives of the people they avidly watch. They want to be the level 60 sorcerer that they spend hours training. This time, Professor Deresiewicz is wrong. People do bond with technology. It allows us to live in a fantasy world, to escape. Escapism is the reason behind this. Just as they said, 30 years ago people had one form of drug, that drug was to escape the world. Acid gives you a wonderful kaleidoscope of new worlds. Ecstasy turns the entire world into a hedonist's perspective. Weed makes everything funny. It's all to escape the harsh realities. Now instead of drugs, we're using the Internet.
Part of the problem is, I can't disagree completely with what Deresiewicz (God, his students must have had fun with his name) without sounding like a hypocrite. He talks about how a lot of the students that are overloaded are those who fall back on several extra curricular activities, building up "a parallel university". I'm in much the same predicament, as are several of my friends. Student run clubs for everything from computer science to math to theater to radio. I'm in loads. It's exhausting, but they're all things I enjoy doing. It makes me wish that a lot of this was worth credit, but it isn't. Universities, despite claiming to be liberal arts and open to general education, aren't about giving you what you want to learn, but what they think you should learn. It amuses me that Chapman was the filming location for the 'bad' school in the film Accepted. The one that didn't agree with the principle of allowing students to create their own classes.
Edmundson's call for dissension brought back some fond memories of my History teacher's class, when he would challenge us to disagree with his theories on causes of historical events. But we didn't. We didn't challenge his all powerful authority. They're right, "there is no no to the yes in our culture". We've lost a lot of the independent thought that resulted from rebellion. And even in the rebellion that does exist today, the prep culture, the goth culture, the emo culture, the whatever-clique-you-choose culture, they're all the same, without a single independent thought. They don't idealize one person, and attempt to follow that example, they idealize each other and remain in a stagnant sense of mind. Nothing new, nothing to reach for. They are each other.
I'm starting to grow tired of listening to the self righteous ramblings of two pretentious professors. As a student, I don't like being talked about as a study subject. I'm a person. This is the problem with academia. They think they can just analyze and examine without care for the how the subject feels. I am not their tool. I am not their statistic. I am my own person, ungoverned by the rules of social norm. They should consider that we are all our own person before categorizing.
Wednesday, October 1, 2008
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4 comments:
*If you're going to throw too (two)professors at each other...
*Now instead of drugs, we're are (we are) using the Internet.
*Hyper link for the "Accepted" film reference doesn't work
*In the conclusion you disagree with your previous paragraph that everyone is the same (excepting you, of course)...
*The opener is weak, I still haven't even though of an opener yet so good luck with that
*Not sure if the (God, his students must have had fun with his name) is appropriate or not for this essay
*Liked the comic link
*Re-post this. I could only read it when I tried to add a comment
the way you posted was odd, half the word was on the end of one line and the other half was the beggining of the next line. understandible it may have been boring since you have heard alot of this before but, a more professional tone would make your essay a bit stornger. with that said i respect your willingness to speak your mind and not fear the backlash.
-Some errors in tense
-You do a lot of generalization
-Kind of all over the place.
-not all of your paragraphs are working to make the same point
Try making your into and conclusion first to stay more focused.
It has a thesis and a conclusion. This essay has good flow, but i think it was supposed to be more formal. One of the hyper links was not working.
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